Jake

    About thirty minutes after Clair left, we all got kicked out of the theater. Apparently you're not allowed to argue during a movie, something about ruining the movie for everyone else.
    When I got home, I called Clair's cell phone to make sure she made it home safely. The phone rang once, then went to voice-mail. "I guess she never turned her phone back on after she left the movie," I said to myself.
    The next day Clair wasn't in class, I went to find Clair's best friend, Jen. She looked confused when I found her.
    "I was just looking for you, have you seen Clair? Is she sick?" Jen asked
    "That's what I was about to ask you. I haven't seen her all day. I tried to call her last night to check on her, like always, and her phone was off."
    "I guess she's sick and just forgot to let us know. Should we go to the Cafe anyways?" 
    The Cafe is were our little group hangs out on Fridays after school.
    "Well I'm going, if she feels better she can join us."
    "OK. Well, I gotta go, Nate is waiting on me. See you then."
 

this is chapter 2 of my book. like it? does it need improvement? let me know what you think.